everyday poetry

This poem from Wendell Berry’s New Collected Poems captures my feeling that poems do not have to change the world, though some do.  They can simply add a song from a person who is like no other.  That’s what we all have in common–we are distinctly ourselves.  Celebrate and develop that  unique voice by continuing to sing.

TO GO BY SINGING

He comes along the street, singing,

a rag of a man, with his game foot and bum’s clothes.

He’s asking for nothing–his hands

aren’t even held out.  His song

is the gift of singing, to him

and to all who will listen.

 

To hear him, you’d think the engines

would all stop, and the flower vendor would stand

with her hands full of flowers and not move.

You’d think somebody would have hired him

and provided him a clean quiet stage to sing on.

 

But there’s no special occasion or place

for his singing–that’s why it needs

to be strong.  His song doesn’t impede the morning

or change it, except by freely adding itself.

 

p.s.  I don’t yet follow Berry’s statement, “that’s why it needs / to be strong.”  Strong in what sense(s)?  Why does not having a special occasion require this strength? I enjoy the poem because it renders one of my beliefs about the value of regular poetry.  Even so, I need to wrestle with this mysterious statement.  Any ideas, anyone?

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Growing Writers 19 Start anew

Season 2, Episode 4

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August 2, 2013 · 8:20 pm

Beluga Whales, Facebook & Egypt

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Recently at the Georgia Aquarium in Atlanta, we saw beluga whales–beautiful, graceful, snow-white swimmers.  The wall plaque explains that they use echolocation.  In other words, they see with sound. They send sounds from a focal point in their head–the name for this point I forget– then they listen to echoes entering through their jaw.  In this way, says the plaque, they learn about objects that surround them.

Isn’t this what writers do?  We send out sounds, while listening for echoes that bounce back from our environment?  Camus says that art exists only in this relationship; without it, we have made something other than  art.  Art, like us–or because of us–is essentially social, Camus claims.  I tend to agree.

These reflections remind me of the book I am reading, Revolution 2.0–a memoir by a young Egyptian, Wael Ghonim.  He explains how the movement opposed to Mubarak’s regime used facebook to build support.  Most interesting to me at the moment is the incremental way his (anonymously administered) facebook page built its membership.  With previous marketing experience, he strategically sent out sounds to other young people who had had enough of brutal authoritarian rule in their country.  In the early days, his page had 100,000 members, seventy percent of whom were under age twenty-four.  The echoes returning from his posts, in the form of tens of thousands of “likes” and comments  per day, taught him about the political environment.  Formerly inactive students slowly built confidence that their voices were being heard and that their ideas mattered.

Finally, I am reminded–again–of one of Whitman’s poems that continues to resonate with me.  Here it is–because it seems to touch on the beluga’s echolocation and Mr. Ghonim’s experience:

A NOISELESS, PATIENT SPIDER

A noiseless patient spider,

I mark’d where on a little promontory it stood isolated,

Mark’d how to explore the vacant vast surrounding,

It launch’d forth filament, filament, filament, out of itself,

Ever unreeling them, ever tirelessly speeding them.

And you O my soul where you stand,

Surrounded, detached, in measureless oceans of space,

Ceaselessly musing, venturing, throwing, seeking the spheres to connect them,

Till the bridge you will need be form’d, till the ductile anchor hold,

Till the gossamer thread you fling catch somewhere, O my soul.

postscript 1. Artists see and forge connections; that’s what they do.  The threads of this post remind me of  the napkin game I learned from friends during our days in Buffalo, NY.  While waiting for our dinner at a restaurant, Susie drew three lines on a paper napkin.  The person sitting on her right had sixty seconds to draw something that connected these three lines.  Though I do not remember the line set-ups or complementary renderings, I recall the game.  This game represents something that artists do well–they see connections, and, if hard to see, the artists forge them.  I think novels satisfy me partly for this reason.  The last one I read, for instance, John Wray’s Canaan’s Tongue, threads together several aspects of American culture–by weaving a fictional tapestry around a gang of slave traders in 1863 Louisiana who are led by the historical person known, in Twain’s Life on the Mississippi, as “The Redeemer.”  Imaginative fiction, especially longer work like a novel, makes connections by creating an entire world of characters.  Through the process of composing these worlds, the writer finds and reveals connections among threads we might not have discovered by ourselves.  

postscript 2. As a teacher, I feel a bit like the beluga whale.  I use echolocation to learn about students’ spirits, which, in turn, helps me help them.  I  help educ-ate students (lead them out–of themselves), as I learn more about who they are and what they care about.  Assignments and exercises send  sounds, and my assessment reads the echoes.

photo credit: http://upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedia/commons/9/98/Beluga_whale.png

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Playing God in Mali

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Today’s New York Times article about music in Mali, prompted the following thought:

If the Taliban presents itself as fundamentally Islamic, why do its members, as they have done in Mali and elsewhere, hold such deep antipathy for singing? Can someone explain to me the belief behind their hatred? I have heard more than one person describe the Koran as inherently poetic–i.e., song-like. Long beards grow naturally on some men. Singing, however, belongs to all of us humans; it is sacrilege to cut short this divine gift.

photo credit: http://i1.ytimg.com/vi/izlrNUwRnXo/maxresdefault.jpg

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July 31, 2013 · 8:36 am

Growing Writers 18 stealing (voice vs. plagiarism)

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July 23, 2013 · 9:36 am

homegrown haiku 7

Magnolia blossoms

Opening to warmth and light

magnolia_blossomsLike those who show love

Growing near my parents’ new home, as well as in our own backyard, are magnolia trees–with their gardenia-like, sweet-smelling blossoms about the size your two hands make, when you shape them into an open cup.  The first line of this poem belongs solely to these magnificent flowers.  The second line describes the main forces that produce these beautiful blossoms.  Once we see the poem’s last line, the marriage metaphor works.  The beauty of ourselves in a loving relationship blossoms, when we remain open to warmth and light.  These things, in natural fact, make us more open, more sweet, more fully ourselves, which, in turn, enriches our time together with each other.

This poem is as much an invitation as a commemoration.  It honors my parents’ sixty years of marriage, while  inviting all of us at the table to remember the grand flowering of the magnolia.  Line two uses the progressive form “opening,” rather than the past “opened,” in order to strike this inviting tone.

The last line uses the verb “show” to make the point that feeling love is one thing, but showing it–so that others see it–adds extra light and warmth.  Unless I am a mushroom or a creature miles deep on the ocean floor, I need these things–just like everyone else.  I need to show them, too.

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Growing Writers. Season 2 Episode 2. Voice and Variety

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July 11, 2013 · 9:31 am

homegrown haiku 6

beech tree

             Old, gnarly beech tree

                   Living through many winters

                             Showing golden leaves

This is a haiku of symbols–one in each line.  The main image comes from a large beech tree, which looks like the one in the attached photo.  We parked under this tree, while visiting my parents.  As with the previous haiku (#5), I wanted a noticeable nearby natural image.  This tree rises proudly in front of the “Manor House” near my parents’ new home.  It is about fifty feet tall and almost as wide.  It has deep purple leaves and a large gray trunk.  If my wife and I joined hands, trying to reach around the trunk with the free hand, we would not touch.  During the hot, humid  summer months, the big tree gives welcome shade all day.

This is also a harsher, more pragmatic and realistic haiku than the others so far.  Starting with the word “old,” it describes disfigurement and struggle.  Granted these initial descriptions end in “golden leaves,” but the poem’s rough start is undeniable.  Once I saw the strength of this old tree, amidst its gnarls and winters, I thought of a marriage’s lasting sixty years.  We know this takes persistence from both partners.  The last line of the poem, however, paints this commitment in gold.  In other words, loving and lasting marriages weather storms that bend branches, and those branches keep growing.  Line two echoes this growth with the word “living.”  The use of “winters” as a symbol of struggle reveals the writer’s life in areas where plants, animals and humans fight against the colder, darker days. This symbol also, incidentally, reflects my reading of a book called Black Elk Speaks, in which the Lakota medicine man who narrates the story asks, “What is one man to make much of his winters, even if they bend him like a heavy snow.”  At certain times of year, before winter, the leaves turn gold.  (Here, I used artistic license by changing this tree’s deep purple leaves to gold, for symbolic reasons.)  In this last line of the poem, I wanted to remind my parents, myself and others of this large tree’s  beautiful presence.  Yes, a close look reveals some crooked branches that have grown through strong winds and reached for sun.  On occasion, though, as during this anniversary weekend,  we step back and  reflect on its graceful grandeur.

photo credit: http://www.nhm.ac.uk/resources-rx/images/1008/250h-copper-beech_tortuosa_109586_1.jpg

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Growing Writers, Season 2 Episode 1: Recycling

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July 8, 2013 · 10:31 am

homegrown haiku 5

Tall tree overhead

              Trunks sprouting like fireworks

                             Green celebration

In this haiku I wanted to render a tree outside my parents’ new home.  This tree, which none of us could identify, grows just off their patio.  It rises about forty feet, or so.  Its leaves are a translucent emerald green, and this poem is one of several in the series meant to help them remember beauty that surrounds them.  The tree is in their yard and will likely be there for a long time, but I wanted to leave a reminder of what they had already told us they liked.  It seems presumptuous to write a poem that tries to give something, like an appreciation, that they already have.  I suppose that the poem shows, more than anything, my desire that they enjoy their new home.  Like most writing, these poems are meant for someone else, while meaning at least as much to the writer.  The first line of the poem begins with a suggestion of protection.   The tree is tall, and its leaves create a canopy overhead to help shield my parents from sun and rain.

The second line made me work hardest; I wanted to capture the shape and arc of the multiple trunks.  They grow from a tight beginning then flare out and up.  I don’t recall the images I tried, but I like this one, and my niece’s endorsement confirms my satisfaction with it.  I suspect that I like the fireworks image not only for its physical description, but also for its association with the celebratory event.

p.s. I have attached no images to this post because I found none that match this particular tree.  Readers will have to use the poem to imagine it.

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